Ten Years

[gollum]

>>Tell them I died for love.
Tell them I died for you.<<

woah...that's beautiful. the cruel irony of that is breathtaking. i love this one.

-g

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[dwim]

10 Years

This waiting for you had destroyed me
This waiting is killing me.
The world made love a big joke
50-50 chance of divorce
but you still got to
marry the high school sweetheart.
I was waiting to hear what it would take
for you to jump off a cliff.
I was waiting to figure out
how long it would be
before I catch you.
This waiting used to fire me up
the matches was waiting
for the flints of fire.
I was waiting to hear the truth
between the lies you've said.
I was so damned confused
and that was why I was waiting.
Yes, I was waiting for these bugs
to get tired of me & leave.
I was waiting for them to leave me alone.
I was waiting for the sun to catch fire
& fall towards us.
My heart had caught the sun
My heart is on fire.
I was waiting for you to know
that I've always loved you.
This waiting had destroyed me.
You've committed the one murder
that you can get away with.
This waiting had killed me.
My heart had burnt to ashes.
This waiting had killed me.
Tell them I died for love.
Tell them I died for you.

[Oz]

Thats really sad.. I like it quite a bit, it reminds me of a song. Like, something that should be sung, ya know? One thing Im not clear on is the first line. Is that supposed to be "has destroyed me"? Or is it had? Other than that, I like it! Keep up the good work!

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"What you should be doing with me..."

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